Tuesday, January 27, 2009

An Experience Felt Never Before!


12th jan 09
its 5.45 am,
i'm facing a beach,
in a city which i'm new to,
pitch black rocks on our side,
the restless sea on the other end,
not familiar to even a single person there apart frm my 5 frens,
an expression of achievement for managing the trip so well,
mom in my head sayin "YOU woke up so early??",
feelin the chillness of the weather,
rememberin the chat we had the very previous nite,
2 hugs from by best best frens,
watchin 2 other frens sit on the rocks,
sending one more to get the dil chahtha hain feel in the pic,
the sun preparin itself to face me,
peeping through the clouds which were just like cotton,
not yet ready to be captured by me in my cam,
emmitting few countable rays of light at first,
waves hittin the rocks hard,
remembering how we fought the salty waves the day before,
a small boat sailin away from us,
the wind whistling in my ear,
a comment on the french couple who walked past by,
SUDDENLY realising that a coffee now wud be perfect,
by then the sun shows up making us realise its a new day,
the last day in that wonderful city,
a fren capturin the sunrise and sayin shru "memory illa",
a plan to maintain silence jus for one minute,
a feeling of being lost,
a feeling of being taken to somewhere on a flying carpet,
a hope that time freezes at this very second,
a thought in head " i desparately need a walk now!",
an experience of the feeling-a need for someone rite now,
the refreshment seen on our faces after THE minute,
4 coffees and 2 teas at la' cafe,
a thought "wher wud we be next year at the same time???",
6 happy faces,
5 normal smiles and one smile showing teeth;) ,
everythin is PRICELESS!
luv u all gals!!

13 comments:

  1. Simply lovely! Brought a smile to my face!

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  2. Oh my god!! such a lovely thought! jus loved it sweetie infact a lot!
    kep it going :)

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  3. "shru.............!!!!!!!!!!!"
    I want to shout like this from the top of the world and tell everyone that "u r the best". i used to tell that u r brilliant, intel and all! u would get irritated na? trust me- u r "just superb"!
    Dear, u made me watch the pondicherry beach with ur words, i think i dont need to see it, i have already seen through ur eyes and words da!

    u need to take up poetry or writing as ur carrer da!

    see, i want to write so much abt this, but i dont have good enough words and ur words have made me blank!

    From the bottom of my heart,u r just
    BBBRRRRRILLIANT,
    LLLLOVVVVELY,
    SWEEEEEET,
    SPONTANEOUS,
    and just
    "HEY not GETTING words da"!
    bye bujji!

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  4. Wooooooooooohooo..
    Now thats wat i cal one heck of a novice poetry..except it wudnt seem tat its novice..grrrrrrrrrrrr8 goin shru..simply lovely..now im wonderin if i felt al tat wen i was there.. :-)

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  5. i loved pondy da... thats wat made me write i guess i never thot i wud write somethin like this!! n thanku naveen n tejas. who's muggs?? thanks 2 u to!!

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  6. omg golt...i couldnt type a comment now coz i had goosebumps all this while... i re-lived "tat early morn" pondy day thru this entry!! wonderful...may be illl keep reading it again n again wen i think of our trip!!
    ps:yella ok kongi smile bagge yaake?

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  7. thanku varsee.... i didn wanna leave one bit also.. so mentioned abt that kongi smile also!! :)

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  8. nice yar..dnt knw wich place u went..but it reminds me of kanyakumari beach.with evry line of urs i m going back to the eveng spent there.....

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  9. Its Pondicherry Nish! Amazin place!

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